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The silence from your lips
is painful to my ears.
The stillness from your toungue
leaves my mouth cracked and dry.
The emptyness in your words
leaves me speechless...and hurt.
is painful to my ears.
The stillness from your toungue
leaves my mouth cracked and dry.
The emptyness in your words
leaves me speechless...and hurt.
not sure about this one. According to my notebook i wrote this october 1st. i dont exactly remember it
EDIT:
I wasn't entirely thrilled with my last stanza, but i'm getting better feedback on this then i expected.
i'd love some more critique/feedback on this guys!
EDIT:
I wasn't entirely thrilled with my last stanza, but i'm getting better feedback on this then i expected.
i'd love some more critique/feedback on this guys!
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very nice
it's very expressive for being short.
loved it!
it's very expressive for being short.
loved it!